前面给大家汇总过2023年9月16日场托福考试当中阅读、听力等方面的机经回顾，本期我们重点给大家从网上分享一下托福写作部分的机经回顾，包含了综合写作和独立写作两个部分，也有解析，大家可以看看。

Writing 写作

综合写作

阅读：

最近发现某个海洋里的微生物具有眼睛（sea-dwelling microorganism’s eye），猜测眼睛的用途的几个theory。

1）眼睛可能用于检测并追踪猎物，帮助微生物捕食。

2）帮助微生物找到阳光强度更高的地方，以吸收更多的太阳能。

3）用于瞄准猎物，然后用某种方式捕获它们，可能是使用触角等。

听力：

反驳

1. 与没有眼睛的相关微生物相比，它们仍然可以成功追踪猎物。这可能意味着眼睛具有其他功能，而不是仅用于追踪猎物。

2. 微生物的进化研究发现，它们变得越来越不依赖阳光产生能量。因此，海洋微生物的复杂眼睛可能有其他功能，而不仅仅是吸收太阳能。此外，听力认为这种进化与眼睛用于感知阳光的功能不合理。

3. 研究人员经过仔细检查后发现，这些眼睛无法很好地聚焦，因此无法提高对其他微小生物的刺穿准确性。这表明眼睛可能无法用于瞄准食物或确定猎物的位置。

独立写作

Your professor is teaching a class on sociology. Write a post responding to the professor's question.

In your response, you should do the following.

- Express and support your opinion.

- Make a contribution to the discussion in your own words.

An effective response will contain at least 100 words.

Doctor Achebe:

More and more, online shopping is becoming the primary way that many people obtain everyday goods. But what are the ramifications for the society in which we live? On the one hand, online shopping has advantages -for example, I can make a purchase without ever leaving my home. However, with fewer people shopping at local shops, in some places, these establishments are having a hard time competing. Do you think that online shopping is, on the whole, affecting society?

Paul:

I think that online shopping has had negative impacts on society. In my city, many local stores have shelves filled with various products that you can find in online stores. This has forced some of them to close down, which not only affects the amount of tax revenue generated in our local community but also impacts the number of job opportunities available to the community members.

Kelly:

It's unfortunate that some local stores are forced to close down, but that's the nature of competition. As consumers, we benefit greatly from online shopping due to lower prices. Even if I find a physical store that can compete with online sellers in terms of pricing, I am still likely to make the purchase online because it means I don't have to spend money on transportation to the store.

网上购物对社会的影响

Paul认为是不好的

Kelly认为是好的

立场：网上购物有积极影响

理由：促进小微企业发展，对就业和经济有好处