雅思作文范文：犯罪是人们的天性使然
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报告类大作文，犯罪类话题
Some scientists believe that studying the behaviour of 3-year-old children can tell which children would grow up to be criminals. To what extent in your opinion is crime a product of human nature or is it possible to stop children from growing up to be criminals?
题目来源：2015年12月12日亚太雅思大作文
题目大意：部分科学家认为，通过研究3岁孩童的行为可以判断他长大后是否会成为罪犯。问：你是否同意犯罪是人们的天性使然，或者说是否同意我们可以阻止孩子成为罪犯。
思路解析：规划写作任务，论证过程分两大方面：
1.基因的确对人是否会犯罪产生影响：基因会决定人们的行为，一些基因会直接或在环境的刺激下造成人们情绪化，缺乏同情心。受到这些基因的影响，这些人会无法正常表达情绪，产生反社会行为。
2. 可以提前干预防止犯罪：人的行为会即受到基因的影响也会受到环境的影响，两者互相作用。能够给孩子创造积极的生活环境，教导正确的行为和情绪管控和调节的方式可以预防犯罪。
审题，找出关键词/限定词
Nature：这个词一出，基本上又是常见的先天和后天的较量。事实上，先天和后天的影响很难明确区分，彼此永远纠缠不清互相作用。因此针对这道题目，对于先天对犯罪的影响，多少总是有的笔者选择同意，而对于预防的是否有用，笔者也表示同意，毕竟后天的环境影响不容忽视。
It is true that genetic disorders and mental illness have provided explanations for a small minority of offenders with specific conditions. Many genes may affect brain functioning in ways that either increases or reduce the chances individuals learning various complex behavior patterns. Some genes are turned on because of physical, social factors; and some genes that influence directly difficult temperament, impulsivity, novelty seeking, and lack of empathy predispose people to be exposed to environmental risks and make it hard for people to express emotions in what would be considered a positive manner, leading people to engage in anti-social behaviors like enjoy getting lost or doing something crazy just for fun.
Such as it is, as there was general agreement that everyone’s behavior is influenced to varying degrees by both genetic and environmental factors, we can divert children from deviant behaviors through fostering positive environment. It has been proven that behavior is molded based on a set of morals, values and beliefs that are instilled in individuals during early childhood, which facilitates decision making throughout the course of an individuals’ life. Therefore, intervening early in one’s life such as providing instructions and guidance on anger management and emotion language or reinforcing helpful behavior both at school and home will definitely diminish the likelihood of embarking on or persisting in a criminal career.
In fact, it is the combination of both biological and social factors mold people into who they are. Genes only partially dictate the mindset of one that chooses to engage in criminal behavior. Under this conception, viable and effective ways will always be available to prevent children from turning into criminals.
相关词汇和语法结构
antisocial behavior
temperament
impulsivity
predispose
deviant
reinforce
embark
viable
报告类大作文，犯罪类话题
Some scientists believe that studying the behaviour of 3-year-old children can tell which children would grow up to be criminals. To what extent in your opinion is crime a product of human nature or is it possible to stop children from growing up to be criminals?
题目来源：2015年12月12日亚太雅思大作文
题目大意：部分科学家认为，通过研究3岁孩童的行为可以判断他长大后是否会成为罪犯。问：你是否同意犯罪是人们的天性使然，或者说是否同意我们可以阻止孩子成为罪犯。
思路解析：规划写作任务，论证过程分两大方面：
1.基因的确对人是否会犯罪产生影响：基因会决定人们的行为，一些基因会直接或在环境的刺激下造成人们情绪化，缺乏同情心。受到这些基因的影响，这些人会无法正常表达情绪，产生反社会行为。
2. 可以提前干预防止犯罪：人的行为会即受到基因的影响也会受到环境的影响，两者互相作用。能够给孩子创造积极的生活环境，教导正确的行为和情绪管控和调节的方式可以预防犯罪。
审题，找出关键词/限定词
Nature：这个词一出，基本上又是常见的先天和后天的较量。事实上，先天和后天的影响很难明确区分，彼此永远纠缠不清互相作用。因此针对这道题目，对于先天对犯罪的影响，多少总是有的笔者选择同意，而对于预防的是否有用，笔者也表示同意，毕竟后天的环境影响不容忽视。
高分写作示范
Many have questioned whether it is possible to determine a link between genetics and criminal behavior. In my opinion, despite strong resistance in many quarters, there is little doubt that genes play a part in antisocial behavior and we can effectively intervene before antisocial behavior escalates into crime.It is true that genetic disorders and mental illness have provided explanations for a small minority of offenders with specific conditions. Many genes may affect brain functioning in ways that either increases or reduce the chances individuals learning various complex behavior patterns. Some genes are turned on because of physical, social factors; and some genes that influence directly difficult temperament, impulsivity, novelty seeking, and lack of empathy predispose people to be exposed to environmental risks and make it hard for people to express emotions in what would be considered a positive manner, leading people to engage in anti-social behaviors like enjoy getting lost or doing something crazy just for fun.
Such as it is, as there was general agreement that everyone’s behavior is influenced to varying degrees by both genetic and environmental factors, we can divert children from deviant behaviors through fostering positive environment. It has been proven that behavior is molded based on a set of morals, values and beliefs that are instilled in individuals during early childhood, which facilitates decision making throughout the course of an individuals’ life. Therefore, intervening early in one’s life such as providing instructions and guidance on anger management and emotion language or reinforcing helpful behavior both at school and home will definitely diminish the likelihood of embarking on or persisting in a criminal career.
In fact, it is the combination of both biological and social factors mold people into who they are. Genes only partially dictate the mindset of one that chooses to engage in criminal behavior. Under this conception, viable and effective ways will always be available to prevent children from turning into criminals.
相关词汇和语法结构
antisocial behavior
temperament
impulsivity
predispose
deviant
reinforce
embark
viable
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