在前面我们也给大家分享过很多雅思写作高分范文,本期我们继续给大家分享一个比较社会性的话题:年轻人越来越不愿意从事户外活动的原因及解决办法,下面我们一起来看看网上老师的高分写作思路和经验,大家可以参考!
本期题目
During holidays and weekends , young people spend less time on outdoor activities in natural environment, such as hiking and mountain climbing. Why? What can be done to encourage them to go out?
年轻人为什么越来越不愿意从事户外活动,比如徒步走和爬山?
题目有两个限定,一是"young people”,二是“outdoor activities in natural environment"。 我们的讨论要尽量贴近这两个限定来回答。如果答“人们太忙,没时间从事户外活动”可能就有些问题;同样,如果答“从事户外活动有风险”,可能也很难说是切题的。
高分范文(来源于网络)
Nowadays it has become more and more evident that those involved in outdoor activities such as hiking and mountain climbing are mainly middle-aged and elderly people, but not young people.
I think there are three factors responsible for this problem. In the first place, with various means of entertainment readily available online, many young people prefer to spend most of their free time in front of the screen, playing computer games, watching movies, or chatting with their friends in social media. Having been used to their virtual life, young people today do not enjoy activities in the natural environment as much as their parents used to.
Another important factor is that young people, high schoolers in particular, living under tremendous academic pressure, often have heavy loads of homework to do, even during holidays and weekends, so they can hardly afford 3-4 hours to go hiking or mountain climbing in the natural environment. Even without any homework, they would prefer to have themselves refreshed by taking a good rest at home.
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