在前面我们给大家分享过很多雅思大作文和小作文的真题,希望对备考的雅思的同学们有所帮助!另外本期我们也给大家分享了2023年9-12月雅思口语题库,大家可以在线留言领取,本期给大家分享一下2023年0909雅思小作文真题:一家商店五种商品的对比(静态柱图),难度比较大。
2023年0909雅思小作文真题:
高分范文:
The chart indicates the sales amount of five commodities which a particular American shop sold based on four seasons over the year of 2011, measured in US dollars.(大家注意定语从句和单位的写法)
Based on the analysis, all the items can be classified into three categories. When it comes to jewelry, it played a leading role in the sales amount of all the goods all the time with winder demonstrating the most obvious (120000), and Autumn, summer and spring showing in a decreasing order(100000, 90000 an d 80000). In terms of female clothing and male clothing, their situation shared an extremely similar pattern with the former being much higher than the latter. To be specific, winter still occupied the first position (90000 and 40000) and eventually stoodsummer (70000 and 20000) with the other two seasons falling between the two extremes(居中).
It is worth mentioning that the story of cosmetics and sports witnessed a different mode because their autumn and spring were the peak seasons (roughly 60000). In addition, the figure of winter sales in cosmetics was nearly twofold as much as that of sports(倍数的写法)(50000 and 30000 or so) and the picture of summer in both items experienced an opposite mode (30000 and 40000).
Seen from the chart, the sales amount of female clothes did not differ largely in four seasons compared with the other four commodities during the given time.
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