雅思写作7分范文:生活技能、团队和个人活动哪个重要

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在前面的内容当中,我们给大家介绍过很多关于雅思写作的话题,本期我们继续给大家从网上分享一下,雅思写作范文,内容主要是培养生活技能,团队活动和个人活动哪个更重要,Team/group activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities which are played alone.,下面我们一起来看看。


雅思写作话题:

Team/group activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities which are played alone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.


就学习生活技能而言,参加团队活动比参加个人活动更重要吗?

写作思路有三个:

(1)团队活动比个人活动更重要;

(2)个人活动比团队活动更重要;

(3)团队活动很重要,但个人活动也很重要。

本题立论的核心就是找出题目中的life skills这一关键词,将其进行分类,再结合另外两个关键词即group activities和activities played alone进行分别讨论。分类讨论,这是雅思写作的一个很有用的思维,也能体现考生的批判思维能力。


7分范文

Are activities played as a team better than those played individually when it comes to learning life skills? The answer, I think, depends on the life skills in question —self-reliance, responsibility, cooperation, sportsmanship, or the ability to feel happy.


Activities that are played alone can develop the sense of self-reliance and responsibility in young people. This is because in such activities, success is entirely a matter of personal efforts, and young people will have to learn to rely on themselves and consider the consequences of their own decisions and actions. Further, playing alone requires one to motivate oneself as there is no team pressure and there is nobody else to blame for failure. This intrinsic motivation as a life skill is perhaps more powerful than external motivation in a team. Further still, people can perhaps derive more happiness and satisfaction from their success in individual sports, and this sense of self-recognition is an essential skill in their work and life.


Group activities such as team sports can teach at least three life skills that benefit young people forever. Firstly, the social aspect of group activities might be what appeals to young people in the first place. Participation in such activities gives young people an opportunity to spend time with peers in a learning environment and practice their social skills. Secondly, by learning to positively handle the winning and losing outcome in group activities, young people can foster their fair-play sportsmanship, a trait extremely important both in their youth-hood and adulthood. Thirdly, group activities will help people understand the value of cooperation. They will get to know that working as a team is key to success in life, though this sometimes might mean personal sacrifices.


To conclude, though group activities can teach people many important life skills, people can gain a lot of other essential skills from solo activities as well. As it is hard to tell which set of skills is more important, we cannot reach the consensus of opinion as to which kind of activities is more useful in the development of our life skills.

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