雅思写作真题范文:公司是否应该给员工超四周的年假

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2023年2月25日的考题重复2019年5月18日和3月2日大陆区题目,完全一样,也是2014年5月15日的原题重现。关于工作类的,题目不难,可以写成2/8开结构,就是先写主体段的两个理由,然后再半段让步,半段转折否定,这种结构写好的话肯定是倾向类观点中的最佳结构,大家好好研究下。范文如下:

Employers should give their staff at least 4 weeks holidays that can help people do better in their job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


In this day and age(目前=in contemporary society), many adults are occupied with(忙于)their full-time jobs and ignore the other parts of life. Under this circumstance, an absolute consensus can hardly be reached whether it is a blessing or a curse for employers to provide employees with at least four-week holidays.For my part, I side with the former to a larger extent


It is self-evident that(不言自明) offering staffs a longer holiday can benefit employees and employers immensely(受益匪浅). To be specific, this policy does a great job in(有助于) relieving employees’ stress from work, and then achieving a rational balance(实现理性平衡) between work and life. It is universally acknowledged that(众所周知)competition is getting increasingly fierce in workplace and many people have no alternative but to(不得不=are forced to) focus on their work, thus remaining little time for the other parts of life, such as participating in leisure activities or keeping their family members company. However, such a policy would enable workers to have a break from their busy schedule, lightening up their mood and refreshing their spirit. As a result, employees will throw themselves into(全身心投入) new challenges with greater enthusiasm andinitiative(积极性) after adequate relaxation, which will undoubtedly contribute to the further development of a company and bring enormous boons(巨大的好处) to their employers.

这段可以写两个理由,如果段与段之间的字数差不多,可以分成两段,如果字数不均匀,也可以写在一段内。我这里写了一个理由,所以就写成一段了。


It has to be admitted that an extended holiday may impose negative impacts onthe company’s operation on the grounds that employees have togive over charge of their tasks to successors(移交工作职责给继任者) before taking a holiday, who may be incompetent(无能力的). However, employers could assign tasks to the right person and supervise the process of the work to avoid unnecessary mistakes. Hence, the adverse influences of a long vacation can be diminished to the least extent(减到最低).(2/8开的文章一定要转回来,这个非常重要)


In light of the analysis mentioned above, I am convinced that employers ought to provide their workers with longer holidays, four weeks at least. Although there might be some baneful effects(负面影响), the merits of this policy are beyond question(毫无疑问).

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