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雅思语法：定语在写作中的多样化方式—介词结构

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我们朗思教育雅思老师会定期给同学们分享雅思考试当中的常考知识点，本期我们继续来给大家分享雅思常见语法知识：定语在写作中的多样化方式—介词结构，希望对备考的同学们有所帮助，另外如果需要雅思写作机经的同学，也可以在线留言。

在前面的内容当中，我们也给大家讲过如果老是用定语从句的时候，为了实现表达的多样性和灵活性，不妨观察定从句子的结构：1) 如果是主谓型，可用非谓语结构替换；2) 如果是系表结构，即名词+who/which/that+ be +表语（形容词/介词词组），实际上我们可以把相容词前置，写成形容词+名词；如果定从中表语是介词词组则可直接用名词+介词词组结构。

举例

Nowadays, learning a new language for the purpose of working in other countries seems to become more and more popular. Adults in need of money①or, why not, recognition are trying to pursue their happiness far away from home. Also, the hey days of employers looking not only for multi-skilled employees②, but they also want people who know more than their mother tongue③. Sooner or later, those who omitted learning more④ are prone to become jobless. （剑11 T3 考生大作文7分节选）

分析

本段中后置定语一共出现四次，如果按照我们平时语言输出方式，我们可能都写成了定语从句如 “Adults who are in need of money; employers who look not only for multi-skilled employees; people who know more than their mother tongue; those who omitted learning more”。但是，本段中考生在表达定语的时候用了三种语言表达方式，分别是介词短语（①），分词结构（②）以及定语从句（③, ④），有效的实现了表达的多样性和灵活性。因此，考官在语法项给出的评价是 “A variety of complex structures is used with some flexibility and accuracy. Grammar and punctuation are well controlled and error–free sentences are frequent”。