7月10日雅思大作文范例:成年人教育更重要?

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2021年7月10雅思大作文题目
The education of young people is highly prioritised in many countries. However, educating adults who cannot write or read is more important and governments should spend more money on this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Introduction
Traditionally, education of young children is always given the top priority in the majority of nations, but prioritising the instruction for illiterate adults is highly recommended by some educationalists. Personally, I fully advocate such recommendation and deem that the corridors of power should allocate more budgets to this.

The apparent argument in its favour is that such policy can definitely bring convenience to those undereducated people in their daily life. To illustrate, there are either instances where the senior easily get lost in the elaborate network of metros since they fail to understand the instructions or cases where people showing ignorance of dosage and warnings misuse the medication, thus spawning tragedies. Hence, wiping out illiteracy for adults should be prioritised. // Additionally, if illiterate adults seize such chance to acquire new working techniques, especially when robots are gradually replacing them to do those repeated work, they will secure a more decent job, and the whole society can thus enjoy a more vigorous workforce.

【解析】从生活和工作两方面进行好处的阐述
undereducated adj. 未受良好教育的
elaborate adj. 复杂的
ignorance n. 无知
spawn vt. 酿成(贬义)
wipe out illiteracy 扫除文盲
secure vt. 获得

To recapitulate, eradicatingilliteracy facilitates the nation to increase economic diversification and optimise industrial structure. Therefore, authorities should invest funds in the education of non-literate adults.
recapitulate v. 总结
eradicate illiteracy 扫除文盲
optimise vt. 优化

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