在2022年12月24日托福考试当中重复了一道2013年9月21日的雅思写作真题，是关于说完美社会需要什么，下面我们一起来看看关于这篇雅思写作的范文，希望对备考的同学们有所帮助！

2022.12.24雅思写作真题，原题重复2013年9月21日雅思真题

Throughout the history, people dream to live in a perfect society while they haven't agreed how the ideal society would be like. What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world? How can people do to achieve an ideal society? (2022/12/24)

解析与思路

本题首先需要定义什么是完美社会，在诸多因素中，找出最重要的那个元素（the most important element）。当然，写作不是做数学题，哪个是最重要的元素并无唯一正确答案，只要考生能自圆其说就没有问题。找到这个最重要的元素后，就可以讨论怎样才能实现的问题。

完美社会的因素可能有：物质丰富、安全感、归属感、人人平等、有上升的机会，等等。但我认为最为重要的是人人平等。人人平等并不意味着大家财富、地位绝对平等，而是指人格平等、机会均等。

那么如何实现这个一个人人平等的理想社会呢？首先是营造相互尊重的氛围；其次是要制定相关法律，在就业市场、教育、医疗等领域确保任何人不被歧视；最后当然是要给社会中每个人提供实现梦想的机会。

网上高分范文

Ever since its appearance，mankind has been trying to build a perfect society, but there has never been a consensus of opinion about what a perfect society would be like.

Ancient Greek thinker Plato once said the ideal society should be governed by philosophers.He may have been right,but a philosopher cannot possibly create an ideal societyin a world ascomplicated astoday's.The most fundamental thing for a perfect society is,of course, that all members are free from poverty, which means the society must be wealthy. At the same time,they should also feel they have been well protected from danger. No society is perfect ifits members cannot enjoy this sense of security.

A sense of belonging is also a cornerstone for a perfect society. Without common values people will not feel they are part of a community,then they will feel lonely and estranged,and eventually become indifferent, or even hostile, to each other
Yet the most important element of an ideal society,I think, is equality among its members.ByequalityI do not mean that everybody should possess the same amount of wealthwhich is not possiblebut that there is no bias against anyone. regardless of his birth race, sex, occupation, and religion.

Howto construct asocietyin which all are equal? I think three steps are essential. In the first place,a general environment must be created in which all people are respected. Secondly laws and rules must be made to ensure that there is no prejudice in job market, education, or medical services,or any other fields whatsoever. Most import of all, a mechanism should be set up so that everyone in the society enjoys equal opportunities to fulfill his or her dreams.